Well these are some of the new samples I've done, recently. It used to end with the male dummy giving out his heart but things, have changed. It now ends with the two in a awkward position, after the malle dummy tries to make her laugh by doing things. Anyways Dave a tutor who looked at our story says that in needs more involvement with the male dummy, more emotional I think he meant. During this discussion JB said that that was what he had in his original idea, so we're now putting back that family picture, but now also the PC plays a role. Since he's a tabulous rasa (I think that's how its spelt) he sees a screen saver of multiple pictures of the artist and his fiancee. He sees the couple lovingly together, a diamond ring and a check, during this the dummy begins to feel what he sees, companionship. So as he looks away from the screen and sits down on the edge of the table he bows his head in depression, because he looks around at the large space around him and he ralises that he's alone.
That small part is a prelude to the main part of the story. Hopefully with this, the audience will get a better understanding of why, the dummy does what he is doing. Another topic I want to adress is the Pirates of the Produce Aisle, I haven't been given any word on what to do, so I'll take the initiative, and draw something. There's gonna be some more concepts coming your way, stay tuned.
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